psicodemon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My stick-short-thingy]

not bad

Keep it up, zombie sound was decent, animation was decent, but 12 fps is pretty low, maybe try 16 or 18 fps for your next one and create a 1 minute fight. (also stop with the zombie ressurection :( just let your stick fight , nearly die , cry for help and then stand up like a man and not the silly instant zombie ressurection : (( ) but keep it up, animation was smoothly and looked oki.

[Madness Reaction]

Ehhmm

Nicely made but kinda short..... and still such a big file... Fix your movie clips / music or backgrounds or amount of layers because this could be done in 1 mb file and then you could make it 7 times larger and 700000 times more entertaining OMG awesome

[Wtf P1.]

wow

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But don't ask for rewards or trophies, you most likely won't get them.

[Put me up! Trailer 1]

to slow

Meh, If you put this low effort in the trailer your not making me warm to watch your movie, so a tip for next time. Don't use bad trailers, nor ask for 5's. You will get a 0 anyway , but also a 0 on your real movie : (

so go create something better. sound effect was ok but out of synch and animation was way to slow.

aolko93 responds:

Thaks for review!

[Cute Anime Girls!]

Not really a movie

Just an image gallery, if you drew em yourself they are kinda clean.. but since your using some weird program to give you a flash gallery I cannot stop myself from thinking you didn't drew them yourself. well just practice animation with the pictures if you want to make a flash movie.

[iClip 7 - Cosmic Arrow]

Not bad

I think you overdone the loading up, but ofcourse the character has to do some kind of power up before he can shoot an arrow like this. But it felt a bit off since it was pretty much a sprite white glow looping a bit, then the very nice 3d ish looks and good graphics. If you want to put this in a game however, don't make it so long or add a option to skip the graphics.

[Disease]

well

Just remove the flashing at start. Overal not bad, the eyeblink animation was good and the tear, but overal it felt a bit slowish. And your drawing style, some are photoshopped or drawn in flash? Well maybe it's your style, but if you draw the characters in flash, or just trace them over from your drawings it looks alot better. Then you can keep the pencil scanned drawings as backgrounds for the feeling.

well that's all good luck.

jinmunsuen responds:

Ahh ok, I will remember that. I did think the first part was a bit odd compared to the rest, thanks for the tips ^^

[Paper flow]

nice

But if your not really coloring your drawings you might want to get a little less dark background, maybe put it on 50% opacity or just remove it or something. Other then that it's not that bad

Zyphonee responds:

Thank you, but yeah, opacity was set on 64%, I wish I would've had more time for working on it, I would've really used a self-made background and colored the whole movie, detailing more into the characters, but I was really rushed, you see, I'm in South America, and in eigth grade, so that means that I'm a thirteen year old kido in the middle of his exams, so I didn't have much time to finish this. Thanks for the review man, I aprettiate your help!

[Months improvement.]

At first

I didn't really notice that much improvements, but it went further, from nearly decent to decent. I mean the sticks look alright now and their combat skills look pretty smooth, so just keep it up and keep improving.

[stick killing dude]

Nice

Cliché storyline, and fighting etc, but the sticks look alright. Pretty smooth etc. Try to upload 1 flash movie that is 7 times as long done in 7 days. Should be a pretty good movie ;)