Thing I would like to add. Stick movies in general are usually not really appreciated. There are however some very good ones, using either great magic effects or enduring battles with more than two sticks fighting continuesly.
The damage part has some potential, something with healthbars, critical strikes and such may be a nice bonus. However your stick fights must be of gruesome quality to be even accepted. (In my opinion, ofcourse random stick fights might get a score of 2, but is that really worth your time)
So to conclude. Do something with the stick fights, magic / damage output wise.
I wouldn't go for a WoW theme, since machinima's are so much better to achieve that. So just go for stick fights (add a little story) and the damage output and you should be going for decent score of 3.
I guess the man has a flu or somesort so his nose is full of snort and he can't sleep very well. So when he wakes up he decides to get some water then look at his aquarium to relax a bit to go back to sleep.
So he stares at his fish thinking a little, falling back to sleep. Dreaming the weird stuff and falls since if you reach deep sleep your muscles will relax a bit. Ending up disturbing his fish.
Liked the game, started on challenging mode right away since most games are too easy. Well this one took quite some time, but the bosses were beatable with the right strategy.. well now I am looking at the medals and I am not getting the slightly harder ones, namely
Top Tipper, Horn Breaker and Champion.
As for mage master and coin collector, I have no clue since I am not in the mood to get them.
Maybe there is a fix or maybe it's entirely my fault, I dunno. If there is some remedy I would like to know otherwise I'll grade it now (10/10 5/5 etc etc it's a very good game)
Just one thing and that's resetting talentspeccs. I understand it's part of the plan and you have to think through your spec and everything. But maybe offer like one or two resets so you can try a different technique or when you change plans
Good story line. What do I say? A VERY GOOD storyline, making this a very great video. I guess you could call it an artpiece.
As for the style of the movie. The animating, the colors, the extra camera movement, the characters, the music and so on all match, they make a perfect couple. Like an alignment of the stars, your vid, is something special.
But if you really want to make a quiz, and make it succesfull.. You got to add a reward at the end. also Loose the animations if you fail a question or just add a small fade out but not the weird yellow power things. Just create a nice background and not some cheap 1 minute work thing.
Also... be atleast serious.. People will try your quiz if your asking them questions that are doable.. Starting easy is okish, but never ever add questions like.. Is this a good quiz... No / yes / vote 5 and stuff like that. Your whole quiz was filled with those silly questions.. so you get a 0 / 10 and a -5 / 5
ye i didn't count but that was alot of button presses,,,,, let me see ... the alphabet, the counting down , all the conversations , It must be around 666 and well else like 1000.. I am missing a replay button though but I guess I destroyed it with the ending :(
but ye you putten some work into this even though it's not that hard it was aloooot of text lol. I bet like 2x full a4 page in 9pt arial.
I didnt actually measure the length, but I just copy and pasted the entire array into word in size 9 arial font, just for you, and it takes up 1 and a half A4 pages.
Ok I saw loads of those point thingies in the walls, most you could get but ther e were like 20 or so like way to deep in the wall, I know you just followed a tutorial and only places a color gradient on the background instead of the red / black gradient, but you could atleast tried to add some challenges like control getting harder when you get more points or moving obstacles. Then the ending... put a flag or something or give a You made it till the end!!! screen thing.. and loosen up with the gradients in your future games.
Ye well not that I am on 4chan or something, but em...... it's actually from a anime series. Called "kuma" in japan, wich is bear in english..............................
........ well anyway animation wasn't to bad but the joke is just sad
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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 19, 2010
Doesn't matter if its WOW or just stick
Thing I would like to add. Stick movies in general are usually not really appreciated. There are however some very good ones, using either great magic effects or enduring battles with more than two sticks fighting continuesly.
The damage part has some potential, something with healthbars, critical strikes and such may be a nice bonus. However your stick fights must be of gruesome quality to be even accepted. (In my opinion, ofcourse random stick fights might get a score of 2, but is that really worth your time)
So to conclude. Do something with the stick fights, magic / damage output wise.
I wouldn't go for a WoW theme, since machinima's are so much better to achieve that. So just go for stick fights (add a little story) and the damage output and you should be going for decent score of 3.
Good luck!
Rated 4 / 5 stars October 18, 2010
Pretty good
I guess the man has a flu or somesort so his nose is full of snort and he can't sleep very well. So when he wakes up he decides to get some water then look at his aquarium to relax a bit to go back to sleep.
So he stares at his fish thinking a little, falling back to sleep. Dreaming the weird stuff and falls since if you reach deep sleep your muscles will relax a bit. Ending up disturbing his fish.
Right..
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 3, 2010
Medals don't work?
Liked the game, started on challenging mode right away since most games are too easy. Well this one took quite some time, but the bosses were beatable with the right strategy.. well now I am looking at the medals and I am not getting the slightly harder ones, namely
Top Tipper, Horn Breaker and Champion.
As for mage master and coin collector, I have no clue since I am not in the mood to get them.
Maybe there is a fix or maybe it's entirely my fault, I dunno. If there is some remedy I would like to know otherwise I'll grade it now (10/10 5/5 etc etc it's a very good game)
Just one thing and that's resetting talentspeccs. I understand it's part of the plan and you have to think through your spec and everything. But maybe offer like one or two resets so you can try a different technique or when you change plans
Rated 5 / 5 stars December 31, 2009
Very nice
Good story line. What do I say? A VERY GOOD storyline, making this a very great video. I guess you could call it an artpiece.
As for the style of the movie. The animating, the colors, the extra camera movement, the characters, the music and so on all match, they make a perfect couple. Like an alignment of the stars, your vid, is something special.
Thanks for posting this to newgrounds man.
Rated 0 / 5 stars August 5, 2009
Just don't make a quiz
But if you really want to make a quiz, and make it succesfull.. You got to add a reward at the end. also Loose the animations if you fail a question or just add a small fade out but not the weird yellow power things. Just create a nice background and not some cheap 1 minute work thing.
Also... be atleast serious.. People will try your quiz if your asking them questions that are doable.. Starting easy is okish, but never ever add questions like.. Is this a good quiz... No / yes / vote 5 and stuff like that. Your whole quiz was filled with those silly questions.. so you get a 0 / 10 and a -5 / 5
Rated 3 / 5 stars July 29, 2009
Lol
ye i didn't count but that was alot of button presses,,,,, let me see ... the alphabet, the counting down , all the conversations , It must be around 666 and well else like 1000.. I am missing a replay button though but I guess I destroyed it with the ending :(
but ye you putten some work into this even though it's not that hard it was aloooot of text lol. I bet like 2x full a4 page in 9pt arial.
I didnt actually measure the length, but I just copy and pasted the entire array into word in size 9 arial font, just for you, and it takes up 1 and a half A4 pages.
Rated 0 / 5 stars July 28, 2009
Lol at pie
Ye I bet you like pie, took me a while to see some :( But overall this is just a school game, not ment to be fun.
Rated 0 / 5 stars July 27, 2009
Lvl 6 doesn't work
Dunno but the ball is just on the floor, not minding his own business. Intresting movie, but kinda useless I guess, and well you got to fix that bug.
Rated 2 / 5 stars July 25, 2009
wtf
Ok I saw loads of those point thingies in the walls, most you could get but ther e were like 20 or so like way to deep in the wall, I know you just followed a tutorial and only places a color gradient on the background instead of the red / black gradient, but you could atleast tried to add some challenges like control getting harder when you get more points or moving obstacles. Then the ending... put a flag or something or give a You made it till the end!!! screen thing.. and loosen up with the gradients in your future games.
Rated 1 / 5 stars July 20, 2009
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
Ye well not that I am on 4chan or something, but em...... it's actually from a anime series. Called "kuma" in japan, wich is bear in english..............................
........ well anyway animation wasn't to bad but the joke is just sad